Warrior Poem Contest!

[Raven[Soulstar]]

This is a rather simple competition if you are the creative type with 'poetic ability' So basically I want you to write a poem using one of the following ideas from the books:

1. Jayfeathers Stick
2. Sharptooth
3. Life of the tribe
4. The journey to the lake
5. Bluestars last breaths
6. Firestar's naming
7. Any apprentice naming cerimony
8. A training sequence
9. The Darkest Hour (book)
10. Firestars Quest (book)

The (book) options you can pick anything from the books. ^^

There is no specific Rhyme scheme or number of lines. I just want to see what you guys can come up with.

Good luck everyone!

[Starheart]

Can I do them all? I'm bored so why not;

Jayfeather's Stick --

Old yet wooden,
My secret friend,
Hidden under roots,
I feel different from within.

With weird scratches,
from years over time,
down by the lake shore,
a secret like a crime.

What's so special,
curiosity ticks at me,
until a cave I find,
an old cat that I could see!

He scratched some lives,
more marks to it,
for then I realized,
from the inward cave pit.

A test from dreams,
I lived another's life,
when I saw,
it was all,
a test.

Today I think how we have made it,
how so has someone else,
but looking at those marks,
something rings like bells.

Some have been lost,
some have failed,
I wonder to that day,
gone, my secret friend, I wailed.

~~~~

Sharptooth--

Slowly killing us all,
Haunting me I feel him,
Across the lands he seeks,
Rainy days seem much colder,
Perfecting fear in our hearts,
Treacherous and scary,
Only us he eats at night,
Others do not know,
The brave girl whom saved us,
Her life was lost yet too.
Sharptooth, gone, yet memories cling,
Saving us was one thing,
yet generations thank her so,
family hearts ache heavy though.

~~~~

Not doing this right now.

~~~~

Bluestar's Last breaths--

A thunder in my heart,
ripping us apart,
never thought I'd see the day,
at least not in that way,
secret kits and lying deputies,
madness go away please,
so king and brave,
I weep the grave,
yet I hear the final breaths.

Drowned out gasps,
whiskering rasps,
I cry inside,
I felt I had died,
my friend, mentor, and trustee
I'm no longer rusty,
he I stand,
not so grand,
yet I hear the final breaths.

Blue stone fur,
loveliest purr,
so loyal and strong,
lasting so long,
I don't think she should've gone,
she was like a fawn,
gentle and sweet,
but to powerful to beat,
yet I hear the final breaths.

~~~~

Firestar's naming--

Hip, Hip, Hooray!
Here's my day,
Rusty no longer,
Firepaw much stronger,
days go by,
Fireheart hear me cry,
the heart beats hard,
Deputy strings me through a shard,
then I break in pain,
Firestar is now in rein,
Here I have family,
but others are missing from me.

~~~~

Quiver and quake,
in joy I shake!
My day! My day!
No longer a kit or a 'paw'
but a warrior like them all!
I hear them cheer!
I hear, I hear!
now I'm a true warrior!

~~~~

Not doing things from books......

GOOD LUCK!!!

*My favorite is Bluestar's final breaths

[Mouse/Tiki/Cocoa]

ill submit on tommorow

[Swifttail]

Firestar's Naming (piont of veiw Firestar)

My nine lives,
Nothing I expected,
Yet everything I expected.
Swiftpaw, Brindleface
Lionheart, and so many others,
But as I got these lives, I couldn't help feeling so odd,
The threat of Scourge,
BloodClan rising,
Out from the dust, into the forest
My forest.
It gave me determination,
These lives,
What I had to do after I got them,
So overwelming,
Yet these lives meant more than anything.
Swiftpaw, the gift of mentoring,
Brindleface, a fury to protect her Clan and kits,
So much power,
In nine small lives.
I had nothing to fear,
Yet I had everything to fear.
All in these nine lives,
I had other cats' lives
Filling me,
Like fire,
Like my name,
Fire alone.
I knew what these lives meant.
I had to use them wisely.
But the cats' who gave them to me,
Would help me all of those nine lives through.
I was then Firestar, leader of ThunderClan,
Because of those nine lives.

[Mouse Tiki Cocoa]

is it okay if we do a song poem?

Jayfeather's Super Stick
(to the tune of yellow submarine)

In the forest, brave and true
Lived a cat, who cured your ticks
And he'll tell you about
Jayfeather's Super Stick

It was found, by the shore
And he napped, for a bit
So he met, some ancient friends
in Jayfeather's Super Stick

We all live in Jayfeather's Super Stick,
Jayfeather's Super Stick, Jayfeather's Super Stick,
We all live in Jayfeather's Super Stick,
Jayfeather's Super Stick,Jayfeather's Super Stick.

Fallen Leaves, and bony Rock
These are not ones you should mock
Survived a flood, and can tell all

We all live in Jayfeather's Super Stick,
Jayfeather's Super Stick, Jayfeather's Super Stick,
We all live in Jayfeather's Super Stick,
Jayfeather's Super Stick, Jayfeather's Super Stick

Big flood ahead, Jaypaw, Big flood ahead!
It doesn't look like it'll rain.
Should have listened!Should have listened!
Don't worry, you'll live.
Jaypaw! Jaypaw!

It has lots, of crossing marks
But only one, doesn't fit
It's the only, fatal death
on Jayfeather's Super Stick

We all live in Jayfeather's Super Stick,
Jayfeather's Super Stick, Jayfeather's Super Stick,
We all live in Jayfeather's Super Stick,
Jayfeather's Super Stick, Jayfeather's Super Stick.

We all live in Jayfeather's Super Stick,
Jayfeather's Super Stick, Jayfeather's Super Stick,
We all live in Jayfeather's Super Stick,
Jayfeather's Super Stick, Jayfeather's Super Stick.

[Swifttail]

lol I even tried singin it it's great!!!!! heh heh ^_^

[Mouse Tiki Cocoa]

lol thanks ;D

[Raven[Soulstar]]

It is beautiful. All of them are! ^^